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When the yelling started from down stairs, I curled away from the noise, holding the book like a protective shield in front of my face. The individual words were mercifully indistinct at this distance, but the pitch and timbre clearly communicated the underlying anger of both parents. I checked my mental calendar and sighed. Yes, it was the last Sunday of the month, so they'd probably be fighting over the past four weeks accumulation of unpaid bills for several hours.

I could go to my bedroom, close the door, and put on some music to drown out their voices. My room's door was just a few feet away, but... The window seat where I sat was warm and comfortable, and I didn't want to move. If I peered over the blockade of pages I held, its vantage gave me a bird's eye view of our neighborhood street. Most of the houses on our block were two stories in height, but there were a few single level ones here and there, giving the row across from me a sort've ragged appearance, as though the shorter houses were baby teeth that hadn't yet been pushed out by their adult successors. This early in the morning, there wasn't much activity below, although two houses down, Mr. Epstein was patrolling the hedge that bordered his front yard, occasionally swooping down on an over enthusiastic frond with his hedge clippers.

"Did they just start?" Erika's voice asked from a little way down the hall leading to our bedrooms.

"Yep," I confirmed, lowering the book I had been ignoring and glancing at her over my shoulder. "Bright and early, just like always." She was wearing the ill-fitting blue pajamas I had given her last Christmas, the long sleeves draped down past her fingertips, and the leg cuffs rolled up to her ankles.

"Crap!" She advanced to the window where I was sitting, peered down the staircase for a moment, and then flopped dejectedly on the first step. "I was going to go down and grab some cereal, but ..."

I shook my head, and then realized that she couldn't see me. "Probably not a good idea right now."

If we stayed up here, out of sight, and presumably out of mind, they would probably be content to flail away at one another without our input. There were, after all, plenty of betrayed promises and failed expectations without dragging Erika or I into the argument, so long as we didn't actively provoke them while they were going at it.

We sat without speaking for several minutes, the verbal artillery from below rolling over us like distant thunder.

"They seemed fine yesterday," she finally said, her wistful tone giving the lie to the frail hope she had obviously tried to pin to our family outing.

"H'm," I responded noncommittally.

I preferred her silent companionship from a few moments earlier. If we talked, if I encouraged the longing I sensed in her to ask the thousands of unanswerable questions she was holding inside, too many ugly truths would be dragged into the open, and I didn't want that.

"They'll be fine after this is over too," I said casually, and continued quickly before she could raise any objections. "We could sneak out and get some Starbucks if you want. Better than cereal any day."

Erika turned so that she was half facing me, leaning back against the staircase banister, and propping her feet on the opposite wall. She was wearing a pair of bedraggled bunny rabbit slippers that hadn't fit her in years.

"Sneak out?" She grinned up at me through the hair which had fallen across her hazel eyes. "I thought Dad cut off that tree branch you were using for your daring escapes."

"Rope," I answered nonchalantly, sweeping my arm towards her in a pretend throw. "He didn't cut the whole tree down, and it actually works better than a branch."

From below, there was a masculine shout, an exclamation of two words distinct from the barrage of insults being hurled back and forth. It snapped across our ears like the crack of a whip against tender flesh. "Fucking bitch!" There was a pause, then the sound of a slamming door, followed shortly by muted thumping and more curses.

"Do you ever think about just leaving?" Erika asked, her sweet expression from a few seconds before replaced with one of forlorn desperation.

"What, like running away or something?" I swung my feet off the window seat, and turned my back on the view of the outside world. This was worse than the conversation of a thousand questions. "Erika, that's crazy."

The morning sunlight flowed around my upright body, over Erika's legs, and landed in a descending ribbon of shimmering light on the steps leading downward.

"No," she murmured, her voice full of an emotion I couldn't identify, "it's not crazy. Look at that!"

"Look at ..."

I broke off when she stood up, being careful not to interrupt the stream of sunshine between us, grasped the stair railing with one hand, and gazed down at the thin swath of light that began three stairs down from her.

"You goofball," I told her, "it's just a sunbeam."

She stood, poised on the brink of something I couldn't begin to fathom, and then leapt outward.

I wanted to scream, to lunge forward and catch her before she fell, but could only sit, paralyzed by the terror of what she had done. She sailed out into emptiness, and then her feet, clad in those ridiculous bunny slippers, landed solidly on the step she had been aiming at. Giggling, she ran downward, her arms spread wide, only stopping when the pathway of light ended. She swiveled, and stood there for an instant, surrounded by the brilliance of the morning sun.

"Erika," I whispered, filled with a sudden dread I couldn't vocalize, "don't!"

Our eyes met, and for the briefest of moments I thought I had reached her, communicated my fears, somehow bridged the gap between us. Then she ran upward, almost seeming to float from one shining stair to the next, her face alight with an inexpressible joy.

"Robin," she cried, "it's beautiful!"

When her slippered feet landed on the last stair in the pathway of light, Erika vanished, and the ribbon of light winked out of existence.

Author's Note:
Recently, I've been reading a series of books collectively called The Iron Druid Chronicles by Kevin Hearne. His books are full of descriptions of "ways" into other realms, and while some of them can only be accessed through the use of druidic power, others are available to everyone, so long as you walk a set series of steps along a certain path. When Gary posted this week's topic, I knew I wanted to explore a similar idea, although it took me a while to flesh out the rest of the story.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witchwife.livejournal.com
Hey Dan! This was really cool. My heart was drawn to both of your characters - and not just out of sympathy!

The dialogue was very believable and I loved the interior thought process shown on the protagonist's end. Not wanting to draw the conversation out in fear of bringing up more difficult subjects, etc. So well done.

Also, this line: "as though the shorter houses were baby teeth that hadn't yet been pushed out by their adult successors."

Excellent work.

The last bit about the pathway of light lost me for a bit, but your note at the bottom cleared things up a bit. I think the genre mash just took me by surprise. Interested in Hearne's series though. I love stuff like this. May order it from the library.

-Nichole

Date: 2014-03-25 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Hey Nichole, thanks for reading, and for taking the time to post such positive feedback. I'm glad you liked my little adventure. :)

Hearne's stuff is a lot of fun, and most of that's quite apart from the magic going on. Even when the killin' starts, he manages to keep a mostly lighthearted tone throughout, and that's nice. My own fiction stuff is quite a bit darker generally, but I do enjoy lighthearted romps too. :)

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kickthehobbit.livejournal.com
...daaaaaaaaaaaaang, now I want to know where she went!

Date: 2014-03-25 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Ah good, then perhaps I did something right. :) This was written after midnight for the most part, simply because I couldn't squeeze writing time in anywhere else.

Hope you liked, and thanks for the comment.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kickthehobbit.livejournal.com
I did like it, rather a lot. :D I don't generally want to know more about stories I didn't enjoy. ;)

Date: 2014-03-25 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Yeah yeah, fuss/pick. I is trying to be sure I thank every last person for reading my crap. *grin*

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kickthehobbit.livejournal.com
well, getting a little extra praise is always nice, too. ;)

Date: 2014-03-25 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mari4212.livejournal.com
Beautiful, and it does capture the sense of the lost entry into Faerie country at the edges of the normal world.

Date: 2014-03-25 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! I pictured this as a confluence of several events, Erika's openness to see the path of light as a path, the sun's position combined with Robin's in the window, a house built in a place of magic. :) Humans don't generally fair all that wel in the realm of faerie though, so you do have to wonder if Erika truly made the best choice.

Thank you for reading, as well as for your kind words.

Dan
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Date: 2014-03-25 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Nonfiction, huh? Well, you know what they say about us writers, we steal from everyone, ourselves included. :) I wanted this to have the feel of magic suddenly present in the ordinary world, a shock, a surprise, and sometimes a path to somewhere else.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roina-arwen.livejournal.com
This was a great story, and I also loved the line about the buildings looking like baby teeth. Great job!

-Laura

Date: 2014-03-25 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you, Laura. Very glad you liked it. :)

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com
I love how effortlessly you capture young people in your writing. It is a skill I very much wish I had. I didn't expect the ending, but it was awesome. :D

Date: 2014-03-25 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Ha, that's excellent! I can finally tell Lizbeth that there's a use to my being able to think and/or act like a kid. *big grin*

Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for reading and commenting.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com
I seem to have the emotional maturity of a toddler. Maybe I should try first-person toddler POV. (Just kidding! Can you imagine how awful that would be?)

Date: 2014-03-25 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Oh, I dunno, I've seen several people writing from the POV of animals, why not toddlers? *evil grin*

Dan

Date: 2014-03-25 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawchicky.livejournal.com
You totally had me going there and I loved it from start to finish.

Date: 2014-03-26 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! So often, you hear people lament that they'd like more magic in their lives, but that could be pretty dangerous in the end. :)

Glad you enjoyed.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-26 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
I thought it was non-fiction too, until the ending!

I loved how real it felt, though, and I felt bad for Robin getting left behind, whether or not his sister made the right choice.

Date: 2014-03-26 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Yes, I was thinking about adding a whole section detailing how Robin dealt with the aftermath of Erika's disappearance, but didn't really have the time to do it justice.

You know what's funny, I couldn't decide whether to make Erika's sibling a boy or girl, so chose an ambiguous name like Robin that could go either way. :) After I finished writing it, I personally thought Robin's character felt more feminine, but that's just me.

Glad you liked, and thanks so much for commenting.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-26 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
I'd assumed the narrator was a boy, because I thought it was non-fiction at first! And then realized that you hadn't explicitly stated, so realized that that was probably deliberate. :D

Date: 2014-03-26 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com
Loved reading it... a nice built up till the anticlimax !

Date: 2014-03-26 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad the story caught your interest. :)

Dan

Date: 2014-03-26 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarcasmoqueen.livejournal.com
Then what happened??

You drag me in... then leave me hanging! Which I suppose was your goal, so well done!

Date: 2014-03-26 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Glad I was able to draw you in, and sorry for the hanging bit. :) It's a bit of a reader's hazard where Idol's concerned I think, at least in these early stages with so many entries. But hey, perhaps a future story in this same universe???

Thanks for reading!

Dan

Date: 2014-03-26 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baxaphobia.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous! I loved it!

The Iron druid books are on my TBR list!

Date: 2014-03-26 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, very glad you enjoyed!

Definitely read Hearne's books, they're great!

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I really liked the dialogue, and I also didn't realize it was fiction until the end.

Date: 2014-03-27 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
You know, it's odd, it never occurred to me when I wrote this that so many people would view it as nonfiction. Of course, one of my parents did yell a lot, so perhaps I was actually writing what I knew. :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phoenixejc.livejournal.com
This is great! I want to know more.

Date: 2014-03-31 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you. If the opportunity presents itself, I'll definitely try and add to this.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
I think you did an excellent job. You fleshed it out quite nicely. Well done.

Date: 2014-03-31 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
I didn't get exactly what you were doing at first, but my feeling was as long as the girl was OK, I'd stick with it and read the last couple of paragraphs. If only all kids could have a temporary physical out once in a while like this ...

Date: 2014-03-31 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yes, the option of an "out" is a very nice thing, so long as it's safe.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheshire23.livejournal.com
This is something I could've used...I, too, used books as a protective shield.

Date: 2014-03-31 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
I think many of us did. :) Thanks for reading and commenting.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-27 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarkerdoodle.livejournal.com
Well, that was a hell of an awesome twist at the end. Loved it! :)

Date: 2014-03-31 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! I always enjoy stories with twists myself.

Dan

Date: 2014-03-28 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lrig-rorrim.livejournal.com
This hit the sweet spot for me, with those lovely specific details and the fantasy element. Also, now I have another book series I need to read. Heh.

Date: 2014-03-31 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
MTA, adding stacks of "to be reads" to book lists everywhere! *grin* Thank you!

Dan

Date: 2014-03-28 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] similiesslip.livejournal.com
I love this idea. I know there are some arguments I would so love to just walk away from on a sunbeam.

Makes me think of the Narnia books by C.S. Lewis.

Date: 2014-03-31 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
The Lewis comparison is high praise. Thank you!

Dan

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