Sorry, I didn't mean to give the impression that you had chosen the names at random -- though it's totally understandable given what I actually wrote! But what I was thinking was, even in that extreme case, it wouldn't have been a problem.
But no, your piece seemed very deliberate to me, and I'm sure the names would've been. (Tiffany isn't even a problem anyway; I assumed the young man was seeing a similarly young person when he said "Tiffany," but I looked that one up just for fun.)
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Date: 2011-11-01 12:14 pm (UTC)But no, your piece seemed very deliberate to me, and I'm sure the names would've been. (Tiffany isn't even a problem anyway; I assumed the young man was seeing a similarly young person when he said "Tiffany," but I looked that one up just for fun.)