This was a really interesting way to handle the prompt-- it didn't even occur to me to fictionalize the crime itself.
The terror here is palpable, and the reader feels as trapped as the victim. What COULD he do? Be shot right where he is, or risk running and hope the killer would miss?
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Date: 2012-02-07 06:31 pm (UTC)The terror here is palpable, and the reader feels as trapped as the victim. What COULD he do? Be shot right where he is, or risk running and hope the killer would miss?
Excellent entry!