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LJ Idol, Week Twelve

Author's Note: This entry is a continuation of the story I wrote in week one, When You Pray, Move Your Feet.

"Okay, which window is it?" Matt demanded, his right arm cocked and ready for the throw.

Tony shuffled his feet, and then craned his neck back for another prolonged look at the row of windows on the house's second story. "The, uh, end one I think."

"Dude!" Matt exclaimed with disgust, relaxing his throwing stance, "didn't you date her for like two years or something?"

"Yeah," Tony shot back, "but we didn't spend a lot of time alone in her bedroom. Her parents kinda frowned on that, ya know?"

"Loser!" his friend scoffed. "No wonder you never told me how far you got with her."

Blushing, Tony took a half-hearted swing at the taller boy, but Matt was too fast on his feet, easily evading the punch.

"Guys," Ben's voice said from behind them, "quit screwing around. Which ever window it is, make a decision, and throw the damned rocks. We're too exposed out here."

It was true. Although the house in front of them was on a cul-de-sac, and traffic at this late hour was unlikely, if a car did turn down the street, the sight of three teenage boys hanging out in a driveway would set off alarm bells in any driver's head. Not for the first time, Tony wondered if he should've come alone.

"Okay, the end one," he finally decided, and stretched out a hand to Matt. "Give them here, I'll do it."

"You?" the blonde-haired boy laughed, and waved him off. "There's a reason no one'll let you pitch anymore when we play baseball."

He stretched, and then with one smooth motion, flung the handful of small stones upward. His marksmanship was perfect, and every missile hit its intended target, tapping on the exposed pane of glass above the window's screen.

"That, my friends," he preened, "is how you give someone a wakeup call."

"It wasn't very loud," Tony objected, staring up at the dark rectangle, "if she's asleep, you might have to do it again."

"Trust me," Ben said, "when he throws rocks at your bedroom window, it's pretty damned loud from inside. Give her a minute."

As if to prove him right, a faint light appeared in the window above them.

Matt laughed, and clapped Tony on the shoulder. "See, step one complete. Now, as long as that's not one of her sisters you just had me wake up, all you gotta do is get her to come down."

Ignoring his friend's enthusiasm, Tony fidgeted from one foot to another, and continued staring upward. "If it was that loud, maybe she's scared. You think she might go tell her parents?"

"Nah," Matt disagreed, "she'd look down first. Wouldn't you?"

"It's not her parents I'm worried about," Ben said, "I see car lights coming down that side street. If they turn in here, we need to haul ass."

Tony glanced over his shoulder, and then faced the house again. "You can go if you want to. I can't leave now."

In the window above, the dim light grew brighter as the blinds were pulled upward. For a moment, Tony stood frozen, gazing at the young girl who was slowly revealed to him. He hadn't seen her for a year and a half, but even at this odd angle, he could tell it was Kellie. Her height, the way she stood, her hair, everything about her was the same as he remembered. Until now, he hadn't really believed it, believed that she had truly come back.

Beside him, Matt waved, then turned and punched his shoulder. "You dog, you didn't tell me she was a babe."

Grinning, Tony stepped in front of him, and motioned to Kellie to open her window. "You never asked."

Kellie hesitated for a few seconds, and then, just as Tony was beginning to fear that she might simply close her blinds and go back to bed, she reached to the center support where the window latched, flipped the two locks upward, and slid it open.

"The car went past," Ben announced, sounding relieved.

"You have a car with more friends in it?" Kellie asked, looking down at Tony with an expression which was difficult to read.

They had exchanged a few e-mails in the months after Kellie left, but it had been increasingly difficult for her to find both free time and a computer with Internet access. As the weeks past, her messages had become more and more infrequent and shorter in length. Eventually, they had stopped altogether. Her voice from above, so long awaited, triggered several memories from their past relationship, and Tony had to physically shake his head to clear them from his vision.

"No, no, it's just the three of us," he stammered, trying to reassure her. "Ben was just worried that if one of your neighbors saw us hanging out here, they might call the cops or something."

"I guess you and your buddies lucked out then," she said, sounding amused.

"Uh, yeah."

He smiled up at her, happy that they were finally talking again, and had to be nudged twice by Matt before he finally noticed.

"This is fun and all," his friend whispered, "but could you ask her to come down?"




"This is a little surreal," were Kellie's first words to him when they started walking.

After she came down stairs, Tony had made hasty introductions in-between her and his two friends, and then, milling around on her driveway, they had briefly discussed where to go next.

"Why don't we just hang out in Kellie's back yard?" Matt had asked, grinning at her.

Clenching his fists, Tony resisted the urge to hit his friend.

"Because," Kellie explained patiently, "my parents' bedroom has windows back there, and my Dad's a light sleeper."

"I think the neighborhood park's our best bet," Tony asserted, again wondering why he hadn't come alone.

"If all four of us walk to the park at this hour," Ben objected, ever the pragmatist, "it'll be noticed. The neighborhood's been pretty jumpy after those kids broke into the pool and wrecked the pumping equipment last month."

"So, we can just take the walking trails behind my house," Kellie suggested. "We'll end up at the park, and it'll have the added benefit of keeping you boys off the streets and away from cop cars."

To Tony, the parallel was bitter sweet, since the park had also been the intended destination the last time he saw Kellie. They hadn't gotten there back then, hadn't even come close before stopping to fight on the sidewalk, but hopefully tonight would be different.

He had hoped that, once Kellie had come down from her bedroom, Ben and Matt, after making nice, would exit stage, or street in this case, left. Neither boy had seemed willing to leave however, and he had felt odd about flat out telling them to get lost after their recent assistance. So, both boys had walked ahead, with he and Kellie trailing behind. Hopefully, far enough behind to avoid eavesdropping.

"What," he answered, trying to ignore the somewhat ominous undercurrent of her statement, "you didn't think I'd come see you?"

She giggled. "No, Tony, I was certain you'd come see me, I just didn't expect that you'd assemble a posse to do it."

"I didn't," he stammered, and then stopped, feeling the hot redness of a blush spreading down his neck. It was dark, maybe she wouldn't notice. "I got excited when I heard you were back, and called Matt and Ben to tell them about you. About us."

He winced, that had been a stupid thing to say. After so long apart, he probably didn't have a chance with her. He had practiced this a hundred times, what he'd say and how he'd act when she finally came back. He'd be happy, but not too eager. He'd be friendly, but not a stalker.

"Tony," her voice was barely audible over the sound of their crunching shoes along the gravel path they were walking, "this isn't easy for me. I know you want to pick up where we left off, but honestly, I don't know if that's possible anymore."

And there it was again, that same sickening lurch he'd experienced when she first told him about going overseas with her parents. He'd felt so hurt and betrayed, so weak and helpless that he'd run away from her back then, shut her out, and probably destroyed what slim chance their relationship could have had at surviving.

"Did you," he felt the bile rising in his throat, and swallowed convulsively. "Did you find somebody else?"

Her arm bridged the gap between them, and slid around his waist. "No, Tony." Their footsteps measured out time, second by second, minute by minute ticking away until she spoke again. "Remember I told you how my parents went to Africa to make a difference?"

"Yes."

"What I didn't realize was how different life truly is over there. I thought it'd be an adventure, that I'd experience things that I'd never imagined before." Again she stopped talking, and their strides ate time together.

"And did you?" he finally asked, feeling lost.

"I saw things that were both beautiful and terrible," she said, speaking slowly at first, and then building to a rush. "I saw people who had risen above everything life had thrown at them, and others who had been completely destroyed. It was amazing, and terrifying, and nothing at all like it is here."

They had emerged from the relative seclusion of the walking trails into the neighborhood park, and were climbing up a hill to the brightly lit parking lot above them. His posse, Ben and Matt, were silhouetted there, patiently waiting for them to arrive.

"I don't know how to do this anymore," Kellie confessed, "my personal limits are all screwed up. Every minute, every second over there, I had to be on my guard. Now, I'm here, sneaking out of my house, walking to the park with a guy I loved once and two total strangers, and it's like I'm in a fantasy world. Am I safe, am I being stupid, is any of this even real?"

They had arrived at the top of the hill, and although Ben and Matt could've easily heard Kellie's last question, they didn't seem to be paying attention.

"I've got some good news and bad news," Matt drawled.

"Yeah?" Tony asked, too shocked to fake more enthusiasm.

"There's only one car headed this way," Ben responded, "but it's a police car. Probably some sort of neighborhood patrol. If it turns in …"

Both boys suddenly crouched.

"Stop, drop, and roll," Matt yelled, and without further warning, both boys were off, plummeting down the hill to either side of them.

Tony gawked at the approaching headlights for a second, and then acted without thinking. Sweeping Kellie off her feet, he rolled her in front of him with a ferocious push, and as the police siren blared behind him, hurled himself after her down the hill. Grass, and sky, and other blurred objects kaleidoscoped through his vision, until, at long last, he flailed to a stop, Kellie lying just beyond him down slope.

He reached out, his fingers barely able to touch her face, and whispered, "Are you okay?"

"I think," she said, as car doors slammed in the parking lot above them, and a spotlight began sweeping from left to right across the hillside, "it was all over for me as soon as I agreed to come down stairs, wasn't it?"

"Pretty much," Tony laughed, unable to stop himself.

"Do you and your posse have a plan?"

"Uh," Tony improvised, "run like Hell until we get to the walking trails, and then keep running until we make it to your house."

"I like it," she said, rolling towards him, "simple, yet elegant." Her face was now less than an inch from his, "and will you hold my hand until we get there?"

"Every step of the way," he promised.

Author's Note #2: And so ends episode number two for Tony and Kellie. I hope you enjoyed where I took the characters in this continuation, and would be interested to know whether you'd like to see them again at some point in the future. As always, thanks so much for reading, and please take a look at the other fabulous entries that are out there in Idol Land this week.

Dan

Date: 2012-01-30 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
I do like where you took the characters. *smile*

This is cute and sweet; I'm glad she came back and that he found her again.

I would find it a little more realistic if Matt and Ben just happened to be there when he heard she was back -- it seems like Tony would get embarrassed, calling them. But that might just be me.

Off to work now -- but you have my vote. *smile*

Date: 2012-01-30 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I picture Tony as being nervous, as well as excited, and calling up Matt and Ben to strategize the best course of action. I credit Matt as the one who came up with the idea of tossing rocks at Kellie's window. After all, if you caught what Ben said, he's renown for it. Tony sorta got sucked in, and was left rather haplessly trying to figure out how to then get rid of them both. *grin*

Of course, I guess they all could've been playing video games over at Tony's house, when his mother casually mentioned that Kellie's family was back in town. The only negative aspect to that plot line... You guessed it, gamers. LOL

Thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad you liked it.

Dan

Date: 2012-01-31 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
Very sweet, loved it.

Date: 2012-01-31 09:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
You're welcome!

But he didn't figure out how to get rid of them, lol. I sense more radishes in his future.

What do you have against gamers, anyway?

You're welcome.

Jem

Date: 2012-01-31 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
"But he didn't figure out how to get rid of them, lol. I sense
more radishes in his future."

Hahaha, I bet you're right about that. My Tony's much more a follower than a leader, and I suspect will get into plenty of scrapes because of that trait. Of course, he could do much worse than following Kellie, assuming she decides to keep him around.

"What do you have against gamers, anyway?"

LOL Nothing, I was just teasing you because of what you said in that comment about your dating history.

Hell, thinking about it, I'd probably be a gamer myself if I could see the screen.

Dan

Date: 2012-01-31 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.

Dan

Date: 2012-01-31 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarcasmoqueen.livejournal.com
Very well written as usual, Dan! I want to see where Tony and Kellie end up...

Date: 2012-01-31 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! As to where they're going, I haven't really decided for sure. :) Gotta keep you tuning in, ya know?

Dan

Date: 2012-02-01 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Ooooohhhhh, so this is some kind of deep-seated antipathy to the lack of console accessibility.

...Actually, there's no reason that consoles couldn't have made turn-based games Dan-friendly. Nintendo, Microsoft, and Sega just need to get their acts together.

Jem

Date: 2012-02-01 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Hahaha, good luck with that, if it doesn't bring in a significantly higher profit margin, it probably won't get done. I do okay though, I've got the timing down enough on WII baseball to occasionally manage to beat the wife and kids. *grin* Boxing too, although that's mostly just flailing away faster.

Dan

Date: 2012-02-01 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
I remember the first installment now, reading this one.

I understand both their viewpoints-- Tony wanted to pick up where they left off, and Kellie seeing the entire world with completely different eyes after having lived in Africa for awhile.

Whether they find their way to something new will be interesting to see!

Date: 2012-02-01 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
I'm glad their little drama caught your attention. *smile* Thanks so much for reading, as well as for letting me know what you thought.

Dan

Date: 2012-02-02 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whipchick.livejournal.com
So interesting to see how they've changed and what they still want! I definitely empathize with Kellie not knowing how to judge what's safe and what's not in a different place - my guy lives in South Africa and I keep doing things I have no idea aren't safe over there. Like, you can't leave your car window down when you're driving through the city because someone might snatch your necklace at a stop sign. Totally crazy.

Date: 2012-02-02 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Lol, the Wii is entirely flailing away at various degrees of fast. We have one, and I find it amusing to watch my roommate trying to stand on the balance board, follow the instructions, and get the Wiimote and nunchuck to actually work together in something resembling the way the directions say they will.

On a side note, I'm much better at Wii tennis than the real thing.

Jem

Date: 2012-02-02 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Yeah, your stop sign precaution is a great example of the type of behaviors I was alluding to. Were this not LJI, with its rather tight length constraints, I probably would've spent a lot longer showing Kellie's initial reluctance. In the end, pretty much all of that got edited out of my final version, and I still came out at something like 2000 words. LOL In a way though, the short format has also been my friend, it tends to preclude my droning on forever about things which the reader's already caught on to.

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed Kellie and Tony's continuing adventures.

Dan

Date: 2012-02-02 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Hahahaha, join the club, I think we're all better at the WII games than the ones in real life. I usually get beaten, but can do passably well in a game of WII bowling. When we went to do some real bowling a few months back though, I'd have thrown a gutter ball every time were it not for the gutter guards. Fail!

Dan

Date: 2012-02-02 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karmasoup.livejournal.com
I love the Tony character because his internal dialogue is so raw, so real, so believable. It's hard to get as solid a feel for Kellie, because, we only know her from the things she says. Though, actually, I'm really liking the posse, too... they are more one-dimensional, of course, but, in the cutest way. What's great about these two pieces of writing is, there's not a lot of action taking place in them, and, yet, the simple stories are still compelling. I do like that Kellie feels herself drawn to Tony uncontrollably, even if she's not entirely sure why, or if it's the right thing. There's still a lot of promise here. I say keep up the good work!

Date: 2012-02-02 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your kind comment!

I have to admit, telling the story from Tony's point of view is a lot of fun for me. All that self-doubt and self-absorption are so easy to write. Kellie now, I think telling a story from her perspective would be a bit more difficult. Still a lot of fun, as she's not one to suffer fools gladly, but definitely more of a challenge.

Yes, even against her better judgment, Kellie still can't help looking at Tony as a potential love interest. Whether she starts off by throwing radishes at him or sneaking out of her house to walk with him, their encounters never quite go exactly as she had planned. In both stories, she wanted closure, planned to sever ties with him once and for all and move on, but she can't ever manage to pull completely away.

Again, thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Dan

Date: 2012-02-02 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mymisguided.livejournal.com
Aw, I remember these characters! They're very endearing, and it's nice to read more of them. The dialogue here, especially, was written well - there's a lot of it, but it reads fast and sounds natural. So good work there! =)

Date: 2012-02-02 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muchtooarrogant.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue, I did my best to try and make it sound teenage-like, without putting in a lot of "likes." *grin*

Glad you liked the characters, and thanks again for reading/commenting.

Dan

Date: 2012-02-03 09:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Lol, you're doing better than me! I can't pick the ball up.

Jem

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